Faded Bubbles...
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“No, I don’t know swimming. I will not go to
seawater. I will experience the scenic view from distance”- said Anita
“You can my dear, trust me I am there to
help you, I know how to swim”- remarked Anuj.
Anita is still in fear, but how can she disappoint her husband because it is their
honeymoon and the perfect time for them to come close and shower love.
Holding
her husband’s hand, Anita plays with the seawater, but her legs are still shivering
and heart is beating fast. Suddenly, the hungry wave makes them apart and Anuj
can only see the faded bubbles and a silent body floating.
This post is an initiative of http://lilliemcferrin.com/five-sentence-fiction-bubbles/
5 comments
OMG! Tragic... and well weaved...
ReplyDeleteCheers, Archana - www.drishti.co
Didn't expect that ending. Terribly tragic!
ReplyDeleteIn my thought, sometimes you should not force a person against his or her desire. It may result in negative like this story.
ReplyDeletequick and tragic turn of events, perhaps her husband has planned her death in this way
ReplyDeleteBubbles
now following your blog
The other way round...
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